Friday, December 3, 2010

The Submit

( An attempt to write instant verses )



The blot in heaps,

The knot in deep,
A lot she weeps,
And in hope she sleeps.

In hot she bleeds,
A lot she pleads,
The jot in screeds,
And in rope she sleeps..

( The present situation of my Motherland)


5 comments:

Shaan Menon said...

excellent verse. welcome back... but i didnt understand the last line.. in rope she sleeps...?

Rajeswari said...

@ Prashaanth,


Thank You!In rope she sleeps means Rest in Peace..Meaning she submits herself to death.

BTW, you changed your profile name from Prashaanth to Esurient reader?

Anonymous said...

excellent.....
.. mystery like a women.....
PAIN... women are here to absorb the pain...
[explain me hundred times... i still have a doubt.... u only know well,what went through your mind when u wrote.. ]

Rajeswari said...

Oh Priya,

Sure, mein hoon na..to clarify your doubt(s) :-)

Rajeswari said...

Oh Priya,

Sure, mein hoon na..to clarify your doubt(s) :-)