Cradled n fondled angels
Paddled in fantasies
Doodled dreams and desires.
Alas, the Living crusades,
and devilish mashers,
and devilish mashers,
Saddled them impure n inglorious.
Life eternal in fear and night.
Life of pawn,bosom &plight.
Nobody to share wail &pain
No mass to leaven and liven
Not a soul to wipe the tears,
and propel their desires.
Yet,they yearn for solace,
But tarnish hover as belace.
Ah,flesh gaged forever,
Sorrows concealed ever,
Suffers the blemish forever,
Desires folded ever.
Can cleanse the sin forever,
Withal,seen as 'workers' ever..
Morrow lost forever,
Worn life endures ever...
8 comments:
Welcome bac...Good to see you:)
This poem remains your best...!!!! and with every refining.. its gettin better and better...!!! and earlier too.. about this poem i had maintained that the cavans for such a poem is never a blog like this..its something bigger.. somethign better... and as told.. with every refinement that you do.. the flag keeps gettin higher and higher..
not only it was OHT, I guess it was from some other galaxy.. where is our dictionary expert.. kangau.. we need you :D
Same request which I made to vin - could you please write some thing in simpler english for lesser mortals like us :D
ST :D
BTW poetess.. if this is the refined version than how was the crude one? I better dont ask ;)
ST...Crude form was too rude..i mean it was a prose.Thats why this refining :-)
wonderful!
though i admit i needed dictionary :)
somehow i liked this - Life of pawn,bosom &plight - sums up feminity :)
good 2 c u back ..
okies, maheep, let me know if u get the dictionary, some one stole mine :)
chechi, ithithiri kadanna kayyayi poyille? onnum manasilaayilla :( onnukoodi refine chyyavo njangale polulla paavangalkku vendi? :P
hwz ya? :)
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