Ah,beguiled heart whispered about your retrace,
I danced with joy,draped dress of ye dearie shade.
Oh! A lots to ask,dozens to share.
Momma...where were you in the yore?
You left me in a cage,
I missed you through my voyage,
Will you be with me in the coming age?
I can't lose you from my stage.
Ye wailing tot ablooms and mellows,
Voice hums and sings cradle songs,
Listen to my motherly melodies.
In a moment,i heard ye footsteps.
I flew to welcome you with hugs
O dear! A deception that was
Neither in my eyes nor in my arms,
I sensed my perpetual illusions.
Raw version can be read here
10 comments:
you claim you are not emotional.. but your poems suggest otherwise!! no ?
Mother&Baby...is it possible to remain unemotional?
I'm not emotional with everyone :-)
you say.. raw version can be read here or there...?? raw version..?? this one that u just posted is far better than the older version... this is of a higher standard..
ST...still u need an intro&background ;-)
nah.. I got the crux after reading the poem.. it was quite direct na :)
i liked the refined version better than the raw one though both are touching. :)
and thnx :D for the conversation :)
Too early to Thank me..We shall continue the same in the coming days too...
okay?Hope to catch you soon on that :-)
oye chechi and aniyan.. what conversation?? this is a public place.. no coded talks here.. or include me in it :P
beautiful!
writing is the most positve way to express...so u keep expressing n keep treating us with these beautiful pieces forever!
take care:)
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