Briny Scars&Bright stars
Barking scars&sparkling stars..
Seizes and pleases….
Lives jam packed with…
Marred scars&the myriad stars.
Marred scars mends us..
Myriad stars wends….
Scars smashes tender heart..
Withal thatch lessons of life.
Yet I wish for stars in life…
I count and count..up above..
Thereby I wish to erase
countless scars of my sky
How wonderful it will be…
If we could spell scars into stars?
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ayyo, OHT :( eitr i am not so bright to read so complicatd versions of poem or I am too sleepy. Ill come back again :)
teh alst two lines are simply superb...! keep up the good work...!!!!
:)
i repeat 'aap ka jawab nahi'
nimisha kavayathri...
fairy magic!!!!
OMG!! this one traveled some where in space in another galaxy.. all I could make out is countless scars and stars in the poem :D
I am sure this one was for some highly intelligent and intellectual people so I wont even try to make sense :P
@ST..ya...you are right!this poem is meant for high intellectuals like you :)
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