Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Victim

Her scream echoed across the ocean.
Alas,None heard the painful fusion.
Elated ogre rendered a grin...
It peeled her tender skin
Flesh ripped and bruised flutterd in ache...
Clothes torn and scattered in heartache...
Heart yelled with constant knots..
Where to ride and how to die?

Gown camouflaged her frame,
Oh!couldn't conceal her shame.
Streets choired the satire tone...
Beats of jeer and twit were thrown
Yearned a shelter to reach and rest..
Ah! she earned the screech and dust
Songs of heedless played through the flute....
Daughters and mothers followed the mute.

Where to ride in the world of wide?
No where to go,no place to hide.
Folks bugled the best curseword
and she became the street's jailbird.
Oh! world large and wide...
Alas,hearts small with pride!
Force spoke their common troth
Rotten and sloth became the oath

Wolves scratches lovely daughters..
Alas,No thought touches the devil mashers.
Beasts relish lovely pleasures...
and daughters burried as eternal martyrs.

10 comments:

Velu said...

Loved the last two lines the most,
"Beasts relish lovely pleasures...
and daughters burried as martyrs."

Amazingly vivid and sad.

Cheers,
Velu

vinny said...

a girl child is the most vulnerable :)

Scrawler, this is too strong an expression...God bless u

Scattered Thoughts... said...

hahahaa. remember what we discussed yesterday..

Rajeswari said...

@Velu Thank You


@Vins...True...most vulnerable.Its a curse

ST You mean assylum thing?:D

Traveller said...

Where to ride in the world of wide?

No where to go,no place to hide.
-TRUTH

Shaan Menon said...

mmm... you are improving with every piece... truly a good creativity...

...but enough of thse imageries... i think you shud try something pleasant.. liek the beautiful nature.. the rivers.. the fields.. may be.. about the god's own country.. the finery....

the sweetest songs are not always the saddest thoughts...!!!!

Rajeswari said...

Prasanth...i wish to unfold the untold stories! Victims always remain as victims..No one dare to trash the culprits.

Truth is always bitter!

Scattered Thoughts... said...

no I mean with the comment thingy. you rock scrawler :))

BTW, still not updated the fine tuned version? come on, we sub standard reader should also get to read that

Rajeswari said...

ST..I rock..thats why i am selected as the Best mom of the year by the jury.Don't you think so?

Anonymous said...

Classic!!