Tuesday, March 17, 2009

In Life's journey...
People make entry and exit..
Some lit candles..
Others blow candles
In the wonderful journey...
At time riders push us...
We gaze around seeking...
a back up to jog on...
Often another fellow traveller..
Hold us and lead through out...
To reach the destination.


PS:This is neither a poem nor a prose.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

:)
:((
thanks a lot!!!

Rajeswari said...

hey..whats that smiley?the second one? why Thanks??i didn't understand??

Anonymous said...

well.. will tell u when we all retire from this blog world and settle down in that dream world where friendship only counts ;)

:))

Rajeswari said...

well,i don't have any plans of retiring from blogosphere! do u understand?Suppose if u retire,i'll pester karmanni to make an entry into blogosphere..appozho???

Anonymous said...

:D
u can do that too :P

Prasanth Moothedath said...

...beautifully said..!!! ya.. its neigther a poem nor a prose.. but it does tell a lot...!!!

vinny said...

that 'fellow' traveller could be HIM :)
take care n dont even think abt retiring from blogosphere:)

Rajeswari said...

@PM..Thanks..ya..its a sort of free verse..Earlier i had apprehensions of posting such verses in the space..Now i'm trying to overcome all those apprehensions..

@Vinnie Dear...you are Right...The fellow traveller is 'Almighty"
Me retiring from blogosphere???No chance!!Infact i'm trying to bring more people into this :-)

Scattered Thoughts... said...

so did I lit the candle or blew some of them ;)

Anil Sawan said...

the fellow traveller could NEVER be HIM :P it could be any one around, or even your conscious :) i still wudn agree on FATE and HE being our puppeteer.. [alrite, let me take a shelter, i cud sense stones starting their journey from mumbai]

Rajeswari said...

@ST...No more wink!!You are gonna blink soon!!The first snap says it all :D

Scattered Thoughts... said...

Sawan - even in this modern and civilized world, no one will argue over the existence of a super natural power. Tell me one race of humans which does not pray and believe in some super natural power. Be it god, allah, iswar, vahe guru or any other name for that matter, but every one of us believe that there is some super natural power with us. Then what would you call that?? I wont say its good to be biased or inclined too much with all this but some thing is there for sure.. Well my two cents only :))

Rajeswari said...

@ST..leave our lil hero..One day he will agree with us!

vinny said...

Sawan saar!
lets forgive u for u know not what u say! btw, why stones starting from Mumbai ??? S3 ???

Shaan Menon said...

well. good discussion...!!! i heard someone whispering about the 'puppeteer'.... just took me back to the al pacino movie Devil's Advocate.. where he says.. "i am no puppeteer kevin..."

Anil Sawan said...

maheep, i never said i dnt believe in a super natural power. i sid i dnt nelieve in FATE and i dnt believe in anyone, be it Him, being our puppeteer!

vine darlin, i was expecting stones from ya :P