Would you listen to your daughter’
Who sings from far away,yet who swings close to you?
Whose cradle still sways there at your place…
Whose roots and blood remains at your space?
Would thyself give the same warmth as before?
Fondling with love..
Embracing with winter breeze&western ghats…
Splashing streams in face…
Soothing eyes with paddy sprawls..
Making merry with carnivals and shrines?
I flew away with knot …
Still thy lived within mine …
I clasped thine all through…Mother Mine…
Thy memories fresh beneath my nest..
Can I loose them from my treasure chest?
A cremains I’m in thy absence!
When the waves bang me…
When the pain pierce my heart..
Where would I confide Dear mother mine?
Nowhere to go when I turn roofless..
Nowhere a lap to lean or nap..
A warp I’m without you..
When I knock you and bawl…
Embrace me with thy kindness…
I raveled through diverse mist
Yet I travelled through my roots…
I wish to retrace to my berth
As thy daughter forever…
No thought can detach me..
From my cradle….
Stem where I blossomed…
Source of my blood and identity..
The place I belong to…
And the perpetual truth of my life….
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strange it is!!
luvly poem chechi..
wow, me first :P
Thank You :-)
Coffee Bite or Eclairs?
didnt like this -
"Nowhere the couch to snooze and snore"
spoiled the overall mood and level :(
so 3 more to go ??
mmm..i understood and agree with you! shall refine that verse.
lot more to go..around 10
I've changed it as "Nowhere a lap to lean or nap"
:) better
So true and bitter... Beautifully expressed! Loved it totally... The daughter will always belong to her mother.. where ever she goes..
you write beautifully! i totally loved your blog. Looking forward to coming back for more...
:)
But, dont she belong to her step mother too....? Kidding... but there is some truth in it too!!!!
@SS...Thank you :-)ya...truth is always bitter...
@LGL..Thank You :-)
@Cigin(Traveller)this is a new theory propounded by SCrawler :-)...and few people are fuming at it!(not you!..few others) ha ha..wish i cud see their faces!!Here the word Mother is used to refer one's home town!For all official purpose u belong to Kochi..But don't u think your heart still lies in ur home town/native place..or the place where u were born and grew?
can u hide that?thats what i've tried to portray! :-)
@karmanna :-)
എന്ത് പറഞ്ഞാലും മതിവരില്ല...:)
അമ്മക്ക് നല്കാവുന്ന വലിയൊരു സമ്മാനം തന്നെ...
അമ്മയും ആശ്വസിക്കുന്നു ..
അകലെ ഒരു മകള് എന്നെ ഓര്ക്കുണ്ടല്ലോ ...
ആ അമ്മയ്ക്ക് വേണ്ടി ഞാന് ചൊല്ലുന്നു ..' "നന്നായി വരുക" '
I am gonna hack your blog some day and block comments in mallu, kannada, tamil and what not.. *devil laugh*
Only available option is to learn malayalam! ***:-)***(wicked smile!)
nicely written words! :)
good sentiment!
@ST
dear,
i was 'paraaya' to dear mother malayalam for a very long time..
abhi abhi milee he unse..
hack-block math karoo bhai ...;)
i do proud to declare 'mere pass be maa hai'...:)
mmm...a good one again!!!! but.. it leaves me in a little pain.. the realisation that i am here the last one to comment.. and that too.. after so many days... anyways...
...me too.. just being back from the 'cradle'... have started feelign the love and the warmth.. didnt exactly wanted to leave it.. when the time arrived..
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