Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Rebirth!

Tears of pain, tears of joy
Starred my metamorphosis.
A new feeling of which
I never had a clue before.
Through the ladders of love and move
Smile and Sacrifice..
I climbed along with time.
Ah!Metamorphosis nestled me on this day!
From a darling daughter to a loving mother.
Rebirth!treasured forever.

A mom and babe blooms and ablooms
Two souls sprung in concurrence
From womb and endurance
World cites the birth and hails the rebirth!

13 comments:

Anil Sawan said...

is mothers day round the corner? beautiful poem.. speaks much about the love reserved for a woman.
complaint: u din comment on my last comment :(

Rajeswari said...
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Rajeswari said...

I celebrate mother's day on Dec 10th! My kid's b'day!
A baby and a mother are born on a same day!
i go by that logic :)

these days...ur words are OHT for me :) so..how can i comment Hero?

Anil Sawan said...

:-)

OHT? wut does that mean?

Rajeswari said...

over head transmission :)

vinny said...

Beautiful !!

Many many happy returns to your kiddo :)

Shaan Menon said...

wow.. a very good one...! really liekd it... inface. the last stanza is superb!

Traveller said...

Belated birthday wishes to your kid!

Anonymous said...

Happy Birthday To Bacchu&Bachu's mother! :D

A word about the poem..
Wonderful post!As always..your imagination is wonderful!Celebrating mother's day&Kid's b'day together..

Two lives born in concurrence
One out of endurance..
Other out of womb!
World cites the birth
And hails the rebirth!

Excellent verses! it gives an extraordinary feel to the whole poem.

Anil Sawan said...

:)

Scattered Thoughts... said...

beautiful words.. and belated wishes to kiddo.. :)

Sen said...

@ scrawler...good one!!!

Anonymous said...

:)
hail maa !!
hail scrawler !!!