Unruffled window stood in eternity...
Songs of sparkling stars,glittering sun
Moon beam were heard from the window...
It coughed drooping leaves&twilit...
It showed Blooming buds and fragrance...
Alas!I never woke up.
I clutched my hands to the grills...
Oftimes...briny drops kissed the grills..
I leaned..and counted stars....
I sensed the world...
Oh! i never sensed the window...
Pall camouflaged ...
I dribbled through the pane...
ofttimes i shut & battered...
Yet It embraced my heartless thoughts..
I 'grew' and agnised...
Evermore undiminishing light remains
AS Beacon forever in my life...
Indeed,Dad is the window of my life...
the roots of my thoughts&seed of my wisdom..
Dad-My guide to the world around!
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:) അച്ഛന് ... ഒരു കുടുംബത്തിന്ടെ നെടുംതൂണ് ...
എന്ടെ ഓര്മകളിലെ ഹീറോ ...
"the roots of my thoughts&source of my wisdom".വളരെ ശരി.. .
എന്ടെ ഓരോ വിഴ്ച്ചകളിലും ആ അദൃശ്യമായ - ശക്തമായ കൈകള്കായി ഞാന് പരതിയുരുന്നു ...
കുട്ടികാലത്തെ ആ വിരല്ത്തുമ്പില് നടന്നു കണ്ടിരുന്ന ആ ലോകം എത്ര സുന്ദരം..
wow, beautiful dedication!
Poem of Purity....
Every girl's first hero - her Dad !
wow...good... its a new one from ur stable.. dad..!!! and u kept it to urself till the very end to reveal what the poem is all about... great work...!!!!
dad! i am not yet one...
...but i am sure
every dad must be proud
to have a daughter like you...
just like the Curtain conceals the window...here the initial words conceals the main theme...
@karmanna...true..dads are pillar of strength...
Thanks Hero!
Vinnie..Thanks :-)
@smithies...Thanks for stopping by :-)
I bow you poetess.. seriously!!
and yes.. I am flying to your place (Dubai I guess?) to get some lessons from you !!! :)
@ST you are most welcome!are u gonna come via mumbai?where our 2 'guides' are there to take u around?after reaching Dubai...its my turn to take u 'around" :-)
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