Twilight followed
Broody nature sprouted
Doors closed and locked.
Napster folks all around
Curtains romped ...
I mused..
Dreamt towards bliss...
gazed through the grills
Moon beam smild..
Lamps kissed the trail..
No longer i waited..
Wobbly way tho......
Walked all alone.
Moon,lamp doodled..
Sirocco&Showers hugged
the Undeterred motion.
Heart whispered...
"Efface the dark,
Moon beam!the
way upwards"
Half way i agnised..
Dawn dawdled moon
Birds chirped..
Cheery sun tinged....
Day returns..
Doors opened
Rejoiced heart whispered..
"I saw light in darkness"
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wow !!!!
'asato ma sadgamaya
tamaso ma jyotirgamaya
mrtyorma amritam gamaya'
...didnt i say.. sometime before... that there is alaways light at the end of the tunnel!!!!
wow.. how do you find these words and how do you blend them together.. if this goes on somewhere in back of your mind all the time... or it just comes through when you start writing?
@ST....Thanks!! Here are the answers to ur questions!
1)How do you find these words?
Through dictionary both English&Malayalam
2)How do you blend them together?
I blend them through Almighty's support
3)If this goes on somewhere in back of your mind all the time?
mostly yes!All the thoughts originate from kitchen,or while making my kid sleep..
4)it just comes through when u start writing?
When the thoughts peep in..i scurry towards the system...to become scrawler...to add and refine my thoughts!
:)
scrawler, and then once you are in front of your system, we get an elegant treat of words :) thats a beautiful poetry, wonderfully woven..
ah..so now I got it.. it means, to write such beautiful poetry, there are two essential prerequisites.. k for kitchen and k for kid.. guess the poet hidden inside me will have to wait some more time :P
hahahhahhaa!!
Scrawler, the poetry builds a sublime mood...then the gangs comments and analysis ...altogether a different story :):)
great weave, i must say...u should publish them somewhere
@Vins..Thanks...
@ST...The philosopher in you will wake up in a couple of years..and you are gonnna to beat our HERO in philosohy!..I hope u will author a book on Life&Philosophy ;)
One more prerequisite is there for writing...A nagging free environment..and that is the most important of all :)
scrawler - me.. philosophy :( nah.. I am happy with weird posts.. at least that brings a smile to my and reader's lips for a second :))
nagging free enviornment.. hmm.. we start nagging or analyzing by putting in our dumb comments after you write so I am sure you dont intend to us (the gang) :P what say vin ?
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