Your birth takes the
lives of living souls…
Leaving their beloved ones alone…
Nowhither the balm..
To cure the malaise
Research flunk to suppress
The malign in you…
Labs,thesis fails in front of you…
Sarcoma!Slay with a vengeance
Alas!without any purpot
Masses beg,cry and die before you…
But not their souls!
You may snatch lives..
But fondled memories
Can’t be nobbled…
You clamp ache in bod
But can’t quell..
The immortal mind...
Decade back,on this day...
You pushed momma to grave...
But you couldn't push
my engraved love to death.
Deathless are the
Boundless love&Priceless flavour..
Which I shed in Daughter’s diary’
Eternal are the traces of mama’s memories
In the chest of my nest.
Womb where i grew is lost..
But,vibe of the string
plays the soulful&swayful
music of love....
You took her away from me..
But you can't wreck the
immortal tomb...
inscribed in my heart....
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mmm... as expected..! good one... u got inspired by john donne??? !!! this poem is of very high standard...!!!!
Thanks..I hope no one will question SC's verdict :p
wo. nice one :)
Deathless are the
Boundless love&Priceless flavour..
how true!!
12-6-4-5-6... but its still is par excellence than any stuff that is there in stable...
shall i tell u one suggestion.. the title needs improvement!
'You clamp ache in bod
But can’t quell..
The immortal mind...'
scrawler u brought the feel :(
i know how my best friend is going through it at this moment... the pain is intolerable ......
@SM...i know..the title is unfit here...now i have changed it (from Ode To Malice to Deathless)which one is better?
the first one..Deathless Love?
Thank God! Now only i got ur 12-6-4-5-6 !
while penning..i never look into the number of verses.
nice post scrawler but sorry I dint get the meaning of
"Your birth takes the
lives of living souls…"
what does that mean?? and BTW, you alright.. someone mentioned about the pain you are going through.. hope every thing is fine.. god bless you my friend!
your birth takes the lives of living souls means...
Birth of cancer takes lives of human beings...
Pain?That was a thing of past..Daughter's diary is the present.
writing down stuff is very healing..hope this poem helps u heal..take care n God bless
oh.. I am sorry about it.. hope you are alright now!! :(
deathless love is better... ! it has a depth.. which both death and love profess..!!! ;)
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Hey Scrawler - wish you a very happy and prosperous new year.. and thanks for your wishes on encounters :))
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