Each day I renew my hopes..
To smile…
Nothing can prevent
the briny tears…
Rolls down my cheeks
Each drop reminds the
Sacrifices made for you.
Veil prevents me
From screaming.
My heart throbs
My voice chokes…
I wish…let the
World know YOU
But if i cry aloud..
I fear..the
world will reject YOU.
All that I do is
Uncontrollably weep…
For your eternal
Mistakes&masks…
Link to vins theory of relativity
(Even though i don’t forgive(explicitly)for the eternal mistakes..,somewhere ..i am doing the act of forgiveness..isn’t it Vins?the more we understand a person..the more we take care of not hurting..by doing boundless sacrifices to make them smile.so..tell me vins..do such people deserve forgiveness?Even if we forgive..can we forget?)
The tree is a synonym of 'HUMANE'...But,we are 'Humans'
Here M implies Mistakes
T implies Tears
S implies Sacrifices
and the paradox is the above three are eternal!
in spite of the eternal 'M'...and eternal 'S'.. how should i define myself? A humane?or just Human?
I am not a 'Banyan Tree" for sure..But i swear..i have been a lil casaurina...who gives a tinge of relief during scorching heat!
Vins can u create an equation using the above m,t& s?
My personal history says i'm weak in Maths ;)
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wo scrawler, u gave meaning to my comments over there! genius you are!
scrawler, you could give a hyperlink for vins post, people who dsnt read her couldnt relate it over here!
Sawn..Thanks for the swift response(genius) ;)
[i stay close to my frienz :-)]
wo wo.. post getting updated and challenging too :-) have to think hard now!! :-)
heyy Scrawler & Sawan, whats happening here ?? :):)
Every theory or concept is always open to criticism, so be this too.Lets Begin...
(thank god its only a virtual space, otherwise i would be beaten up by now !!)
there's no need to explain why tears, sacrifices and mistakes...in case we 'love' like a tree does.. thats the whole point of this theory.
one may realise the futility behind tears, sacrifices and mistakes every now and then...but still is stuck on getting at least an acknowledgement from the other side, at least a medal for all one has sacrificed, Why ??
one needs to be helpful, so long as that purpose is solved, great..concern, medals or acknowledgements aren't necessary..
its my life and one life, i wanna be light and happy..if i loved and gave fully without receiving anything from opposite side or getting immense tears, so be it..but i have Loved truely..so Lived Fully..that's enough for me:) I will die a Happy Woman :)
Your sacrifices, each and every drop of your tears, all the things u feel are ur mistakes...Everything will be answered eventually, trust me, sweetheart...
the words in this poem just fall out from a lot of pain. Pain which is negative and unnecessary..n above all 'You dont deserve it!!'
So Forgive, let it go, let it drip off... all this pain...before its too late
Love...Vin (n u will now be in my prayers forever)
I have used Vins Theory as a base,
I would go for
M = S F squared
where,
M implies Mistakes that are eternal
S implies Sacrifices and
F implies Forgiveness
This thoery works very well in all relationships where Love manages to find a foothold. Mistakes are the eternal, the omnipotent; the ever stable life force. Sacrifice the medium, the constant; it was, it is and it will be. Forgiveness is the multiplier factor, the more one forgives, the more Mistakes one makes by giving the other control over self. With Sacrifice being in a perpetual state of who-knows-the-beginning and who-knows-the-end in every relationship, Mistakes are growing or diminishing in much the same measure as does Forgiveness! As long as a single entity wishes to be in a relationship and thrive, it must do so collectively in the absolute sense, thereby maintaining the Universal Equilibrium!
After this I have to apply for Z category security, Vin knows where I live:)
I had to bring in forgiveness as, tears do not work well unless forgiveness is also included
You could also go for
M = S T F squared :)
ha ha...so i expect a new post on 'Senorita's theory of relativity"
alright guys, i took a print out of this page.. at office right now.. got hell lotsa work.. so would reply in the evening once i reach back home.. :-) in the mean time ill read the printout.
@scrawler ... I am suffering from writer block at the moment...hopefully will come out of it... for the time being the theory spoof is the best I can come up with :)
....real sorrow due to intense passion and affection from deep inside is reflected undilutely
hey hey i replied in vins post.. support needed :-)
you guys live much above my head.... somewhere in the skies....:-)
Dear traveller...the topic we are discussing is about compassion&forgiveness!
you being a Socialist(even thou diluted for all economic purpose :P)how can u abstain from commenting?The essence of socialism is Caring & Sharing!So you should lead the discussion!
hey sweeties... how r u all doing ?? oops, even sweeties is 'S' !!!
sorry for being late...! good writing... !!!!! the previous comments and the post itself say so..
Caring, compassion and Cig.... it rhymes na... in reality too....:-)BTW, I ve not diluted socialism for all economic purposes.... I just want people to understand the importance of individual to the extent they understand the importance of the society.
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